Marquette Street
A Man, a Contract, and a Crisis of Confidence
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Eddie spent the bus ride home alternately grinning like a man who’d just won the lottery and staring blankly ahead like someone who’d misplaced his sanity. The visitor badge still hung around his neck because he couldn’t figure out how to get it off without tearing his shirt. People on the bus gave him a wide berth, which he appreciated because he needed the room to panic properly.
By the time he reached his apartment—a small, cluttered shotgun unit that smelled faintly of onions regardless of whether he’d cooked any—Eddie felt like he was floating. Or sinking. Or both.
He sat on the edge of his bed, staring at the wall.
“I’m gonna be on TV,” he whispered.
Then louder: “I’m gonna be on TV?”
Then with increasing concern: “I’m gonna be on TV.”
He lay back on the bed and immediately regretted it because he’d left a pack of hotdog buns there earlier and now they were squished. He brushed crumbs off his shirt, sat up again, and sighed.
He had no idea how to prepare for something like this. He’d prepared for hurricanes, for running out of relish during Jazz Fest, for customers who insisted they knew “real New Orleans cuisine” despite pronouncing andouille like “ann-doolie,” but nothing prepared a man for suddenly being told the world wanted to watch him live his life.
The next morning, Eddie returned to his cart, hoping routine would help. He was halfway through serving a group of college kids when a familiar voice floated over the sizzling sound of onions on the grill.
“Mr. Marquette!”
Violet Desmarais approached with purpose, a leather folio tucked under her arm. As always, she looked like she’d been styled by divine intervention.
“Ma’am,” Eddie said, trying very hard not to drop the tongs, “I wasn’t expectin’ you.”
“I know,” she replied. “That’s why I came. I wanted to catch you before you got cold feet.”
Eddie blinked. “I’ve got boiling feet, actually. Burnin’. Maybe on fire.”
She nodded sympathetically. “Then let’s have a little chat.”
She guided him to a nearby bench, leaving one of the production assistants to happily take over the cart. Eddie watched nervously as the assistant over-applied relish in a way that offended him on a spiritual level.
Violet opened the folio.
Inside was a contract.
An honest-to-goodness contract with typed paragraphs, bold headings, and more signatures lines than Eddie thought any document should reasonably have.
“This,” Violet said, “is your official agreement to join the cast of Street Bites: Crescent City Chronicles.”
Eddie swallowed. “So it’s… real. All of it.”
“As real as it gets.”
He stared at the contract. At his name printed so neatly on the front page. At the clauses that used words like personality rights and appearance schedule and compensation—which was a number far larger than anything he’d earned selling hotdogs in a given month.
“I’m scared,” Eddie admitted quietly.
Violet softened. “You’re supposed to be.”
“Is that comforting?”
“No,” she said honestly, “but it’s true.”
She leaned forward.
“Eddie, you didn’t charm us because you’re trained. You charmed us because you aren’t. You made the whole room laugh without trying. And do you know how rare that is? Authenticity can’t be coached. It can only be captured.”
He looked down at his hands—calloused, mustard-stained, familiar.
“But what if I mess up?”
“Oh, Eddie,” she said, “that’s the entire point.”
He let out a breath he didn’t realize he’d been holding.
“Will… will I still be able to run my cart?” he asked.
“Absolutely,” she said. “It’s part of your story. We’d never take that away.”
A long silence stretched between them.
Then, with a shaky hand and a fluttering heart, Eddie picked up the pen she offered.
He signed his name.
The moment the ink dried, he felt something settle in him—not certainty, not confidence, but a quiet acknowledgment that maybe, for once, the universe had shoved him in the right direction.
Violet beamed. “Welcome to the show, Eddie.”
He looked out at Jackson Square—musicians tuning their instruments, artists sketching the cathedral, pigeons plotting their next bread heist—and felt both terrified and hopeful.
“Guess I’m really doin’ this,” he murmured.
Violet nodded. “Yes. You are.”
And Eddie Marquette, hotdog vendor, accidental entertainer, and man perpetually teetering on the edge of chaos, realized that the biggest moment of his life had arrived—
—and somehow, impossibly, he hadn’t tripped over it. Yet.
By the time he reached his apartment—a small, cluttered shotgun unit that smelled faintly of onions regardless of whether he’d cooked any—Eddie felt like he was floating. Or sinking. Or both.
He sat on the edge of his bed, staring at the wall.
“I’m gonna be on TV,” he whispered.
Then louder: “I’m gonna be on TV?”
Then with increasing concern: “I’m gonna be on TV.”
He lay back on the bed and immediately regretted it because he’d left a pack of hotdog buns there earlier and now they were squished. He brushed crumbs off his shirt, sat up again, and sighed.
He had no idea how to prepare for something like this. He’d prepared for hurricanes, for running out of relish during Jazz Fest, for customers who insisted they knew “real New Orleans cuisine” despite pronouncing andouille like “ann-doolie,” but nothing prepared a man for suddenly being told the world wanted to watch him live his life.
The next morning, Eddie returned to his cart, hoping routine would help. He was halfway through serving a group of college kids when a familiar voice floated over the sizzling sound of onions on the grill.
“Mr. Marquette!”
Violet Desmarais approached with purpose, a leather folio tucked under her arm. As always, she looked like she’d been styled by divine intervention.
“Ma’am,” Eddie said, trying very hard not to drop the tongs, “I wasn’t expectin’ you.”
“I know,” she replied. “That’s why I came. I wanted to catch you before you got cold feet.”
Eddie blinked. “I’ve got boiling feet, actually. Burnin’. Maybe on fire.”
She nodded sympathetically. “Then let’s have a little chat.”
She guided him to a nearby bench, leaving one of the production assistants to happily take over the cart. Eddie watched nervously as the assistant over-applied relish in a way that offended him on a spiritual level.
Violet opened the folio.
Inside was a contract.
An honest-to-goodness contract with typed paragraphs, bold headings, and more signatures lines than Eddie thought any document should reasonably have.
“This,” Violet said, “is your official agreement to join the cast of Street Bites: Crescent City Chronicles.”
Eddie swallowed. “So it’s… real. All of it.”
“As real as it gets.”
He stared at the contract. At his name printed so neatly on the front page. At the clauses that used words like personality rights and appearance schedule and compensation—which was a number far larger than anything he’d earned selling hotdogs in a given month.
“I’m scared,” Eddie admitted quietly.
Violet softened. “You’re supposed to be.”
“Is that comforting?”
“No,” she said honestly, “but it’s true.”
She leaned forward.
“Eddie, you didn’t charm us because you’re trained. You charmed us because you aren’t. You made the whole room laugh without trying. And do you know how rare that is? Authenticity can’t be coached. It can only be captured.”
He looked down at his hands—calloused, mustard-stained, familiar.
“But what if I mess up?”
“Oh, Eddie,” she said, “that’s the entire point.”
He let out a breath he didn’t realize he’d been holding.
“Will… will I still be able to run my cart?” he asked.
“Absolutely,” she said. “It’s part of your story. We’d never take that away.”
A long silence stretched between them.
Then, with a shaky hand and a fluttering heart, Eddie picked up the pen she offered.
He signed his name.
The moment the ink dried, he felt something settle in him—not certainty, not confidence, but a quiet acknowledgment that maybe, for once, the universe had shoved him in the right direction.
Violet beamed. “Welcome to the show, Eddie.”
He looked out at Jackson Square—musicians tuning their instruments, artists sketching the cathedral, pigeons plotting their next bread heist—and felt both terrified and hopeful.
“Guess I’m really doin’ this,” he murmured.
Violet nodded. “Yes. You are.”
And Eddie Marquette, hotdog vendor, accidental entertainer, and man perpetually teetering on the edge of chaos, realized that the biggest moment of his life had arrived—
—and somehow, impossibly, he hadn’t tripped over it. Yet.